For a comic book, I found Forget Sorrow very dependent on the
words of the narrator. The narrator,
weather it’s the daughter or her father, does a lot of the work of explaining
what’s happening, the images often lean on these descriptions like a
crutch. When the narrator says she left
China, an image will show her with a suitcase.
The narrator and images seemed to have a call and response relationship,
instead of a trade off between narration/dialogue and images that I see in many
other comics. I like comic books that
let the images speak for themselves, let the reader explore the cells for more
information about the story. Here, I
often felt the images were more like illustrations that accompanied the narration
and didn’t always have a lot to say on their own.
What
I really liked about the images was when the author used more abstract drawings
to show concepts or feelings. On page 79
there is a memorable drawing of the body-less heads of children gnawing on a
skeleton. I thought this showed the
character’s fears in a creative way. The
author also uses this to bring her poetic lines to life. When the grandfather is wandering and
begging, we see his limbs sticking out of a river he can’t swim free of.
The
author used this same technique to portray bad deeds. Her stalker ex, Rotten Egg, is portrayed as
very large, inhumanly tall, and he reminded me of some kind of evil
spirit. I really loved the full-page
illustration of him on page 11 that showed him as big as the house the
narrator’s family is hiding within. Characters
doing bad things are often shown as larger than life or with demonic
qualities. When the narrator’s father
yells at her, he sprouts devil horns, page 70.
When the narrator’s father returns home to China to visit, his relatives
have giant heads as they badger him for things, page 196. I also really liked, on page 200, when the
family feels they are being spied on. We
get large eyes at the top, and the pigs for slaughter right above them. This could be considered too literal for
some, but I really like the bold imagery in this cell and it really stuck with
me. Also, when the narrator dreams that
her mother in stuck in a pagoda, the drawing was so beautiful that I found
myself wishing it was a whole page.
These images took on a life of their own in my head, and added depth
that the written text hinted at.
I
think the most consistent theme that kept coming up for me was nature. The narrator’s father grows up with a garden,
and the narrator is constantly taking walks outside. I found the animals in the text would mirror
the human characters. Cats killing mice
when family plots were unfolding, the family of rabbits while the narrator is
walking with her family, and the lone fox when the grandfather is on his own.
Weather often
helps show the character’s emotions. The
character’s faces are not always brimming with emotion, and so the background
of thunderclouds or shadow helps reinforce the feelings they are having at the
moment. When the narrator is mad at her
father, on page 38, there are heavy clouds behind her. When there is family strife over the decision
to let Third Uncle take over the countryside land, the characters are shown
with lightning and rain in their backgrounds.
The dialogue could
be a little too on the nose sometimes, the narrators did a lot of the work
while the dialogue, especially in flashbacks, didn’t always pack a punch. I did really like the thoughts of the
narrator’s father as a young man. In
these he was honest and funny. I felt
like knew him best from these moments, not necessarily what he said during his
recounting.
-Iris
Okay and like and don’t like comments are really what you find effective and ineffective? In comic theory the relationship betweeen the image and the narration are interdependent and when the image alone tells the story, it has been contextualized by text somewhere earlier. So it’s a little different yeah? I appreciate your connections with nature and the elements that motif this saga. Especially the weather-which was an important character, but i didn’t recognize the effectiveness of it - thanks for that
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I was also really struck by the illustration of emotion either on character's faces or off. There's even a scene when Yang and her father are walking away from an argument with each other and they each have a classic comic scribble above their heads to show a visual representation of their distress. (What is this called? Any comic book/anime folks out there?)
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ReplyDeleteI appreciate your insights about the animals and the weather. I hadn't noticed it while I was reading and have the urge to go back when I get the time. I also enjoyed when the images went beyond the realistic to portray the emotion behind them. The page with the enlarged Rotten Egg was one of my favorites for depicting the caged feeling Yang and her family felt in their house.
I also had the sense that the narration and dialogue was too on the nose sometimes but once I started thinking of it as it being Yang's father's story told orally first, it made a little more sense to me. Hannah Jane pointed out that Yang's process was writing her father's words first as text then added the images, so maybe the narration is prioritized with the images as a depiction/response to it?